An Evening by Gwendolyn Brooks
A sunset's mounded cloud; 6
A diamond evening-star; 6
Sad blue hills afar; 5
Love in his shroud. 4
Scarcely a tear to shed; 6
Hardly a word to say; 6
The end of a summer day; 6
Sweet Love dead. 3
A Realization by Jennifer Reeb
he'd never been so proud;
never thought he'd come this far;
Thought that would have been it for the bar;
gone was the cloud.
he awoke and they said;
sir you need to go pray ;
there was a crash today;
your friend's dead
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ooops-- just one 'm' in imitation.
ReplyDeleteLet me know when you are finished rewriting.